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Post by greenie on Feb 22, 2010 20:46:10 GMT 10
Title: Treat Rating: PG-13 Length: 140 Competitor: Buri: Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: Kel and Raoul are both hit by sudden shyness.
“This is ridiculous.” Buri wasn’t sure who was redder in the face; her husband or Kel. “You both told me separately that you were keen for this, so either you were lying to me or you’re being stupid now.” Their faces reddened even more and they looked away from each other. “This is ridiculous,” Buri repeated. “Kiss each other right now, before I shove your faces together.” Raoul grinned and Kel suppressed a smile; bossy, impatient Buri standing bare between them with her hands on her hips did make a comical sight. “I think I’d best obey the birthday girl,” said Raoul. Kel nodded and stepped closer to him, and then held her breath as he cautiously leaned in and kissed her. “Good,” said Buri, and walked over to the bed. “Now hurry up and give me my birthday treat.”
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Post by darkakane on Feb 22, 2010 21:03:55 GMT 10
last line is so funny! I really like impatient Buri! Great Work!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 22, 2010 23:11:17 GMT 10
Seriously what would they do without Buri to make them be sensible!? This is great!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 23:23:05 GMT 10
Hahaha! The "you're being stupid now" is so Buri. I adore this!
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