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Post by Lisa on Feb 21, 2010 14:53:34 GMT 10
Title: Surprise Rating: R Length: 180 words Competitor: Buri Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: Raoul gets the birthday present he didn’t know he wanted.
The last thing Raoul of Goldenlake was expecting, when he returned to the palace on his birthday, was to find his wife in bed with someone else. No, correct that – the last thing he was expecting was to see Buri in bed with Keladry of Mindelan.
But once the door was opened, the image was burned into his mind. The two women were in the midst of acts he had never dreamed of, and knew he would never get it out of his fantasies now that it was there.
Buri looked up, grinning at him. “Happy birthday, love,” she greeted, not stopping her movements. Kel, mid-gasp, also smiled.
“You – Kel – all this – present - for me?” The words running quickly through his head would not translate to verbal language.
“You’re dirty from the road. Go take a bath, and we’ll be waiting for you.”
He left – he ran, really – and Kel looked up at Buri, her face flush with pleasure. “That was quick thinking. I’m impressed.”
“You’ll be even more impressed when he comes back,” Buri answered with a smirk.
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Post by greenie on Feb 21, 2010 15:00:36 GMT 10
I love how it was all quick thinking on Buri's part and they're all still happy with it, but even more I love the thought of Raoul running to take a bath.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 21, 2010 15:02:24 GMT 10
Thanks! (that's my favorite bit, actually. he's so cute.)
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 21, 2010 15:10:08 GMT 10
This is awesome! Funny and sexy and Buri totally planned it all along!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 21, 2010 15:19:35 GMT 10
You know she did!! Thanks!!
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Kit
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Post by Kit on Feb 23, 2010 13:58:54 GMT 10
Freshly showered Raoul is a rather overwhelming image.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 23, 2010 13:59:56 GMT 10
Isn't it though?
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