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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 14:31:08 GMT 10
Title: More Rumors Rating: PG Length: 151 words Competitor: Buri Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: the rumors are still being spread, and Neal has some questions.
“Do you realize what they’re saying about you?” Neal demanded.
“That’s I’m a cursed good commander?”
“Well, yes, but also that you – you—”
“That I’m sleeping with Buri, right?”
He nodded angrily.
“Neal, they’re rumors. They had me in bed with Raoul when I was his squire, Lord Wyldon when I was assigned to New Hope. What does it matter?”
“But it’s not right!”
“What if they were accurate?”
He blinked. “You slept with the Stump?”
“Of course not! But would it make a difference if I had?”
“It would to me.”
“And if I’m sleeping with Buri, then?”
He frowned. “Well, I suppose it wouldn’t.”
“Exactly.” Kel said firmly. “The fact that I’m sleeping with her doesn’t change the fact that I’m a good commander.”
“Wait – do you mean to say that you are?”
“I don’t know,” Kel said with a grin. “You’ve heard the rumors – you tell me.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 22, 2010 14:36:36 GMT 10
LOL. I love how she still doesn't give him a clear answer!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 14:38:08 GMT 10
It's good to keep him on his toes.
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allymarty
Rider Trainee
I also answer to Allie.
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Post by allymarty on Feb 22, 2010 18:20:02 GMT 10
Clever!
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Post by greenie on Feb 22, 2010 19:22:52 GMT 10
Hee, awesome fic!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 23:22:05 GMT 10
Thanks, guys!
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 23, 2010 13:43:38 GMT 10
Oh, wonderful. You do rather perfect dialogue, and I love how Kel is so firm and teasing, all at once, and Neal latches on to all the wrong things
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Post by Lisa on Feb 23, 2010 14:03:29 GMT 10
::blush:: Kit, you know exactly what to say to make my heart squeal in delight. Thank you *so* much!
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