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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 23, 2010 18:52:20 GMT 10
Title: Crush 3 Rating: PG Length: 130 words Competitor: Buriam Tourakom Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: Raoul wonders.
After that, Raoul watched his squire more carefully than he meant to. She had a secret – a secret Buri knew – that made her decide to break things off with a young man who had, so far as Raoul could tell, been good to her. But he saw no evidence that she was embarking on a new romance. If she (as he suspected) had a new crush, he assumed it was the unrequited sort.
It was something Buri knew, either because Kel told her, or because she'd guessed. But neither of them would tell Raoul. He told himself it was folly to assume the secret involved him – but he wondered, especially when he began to notice how often Kel found a reason to be elsewhere when Buri came to his rooms.
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Post by greenie on Feb 24, 2010 14:43:36 GMT 10
Teehee, poor Raoul.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 25, 2010 0:13:32 GMT 10
I know. I'm not sure it's in character for him to be quite as clueless as I made him...
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Post by greenie on Feb 25, 2010 1:57:35 GMT 10
No, I think it all fits perfectly.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 25, 2010 14:10:22 GMT 10
I like his curiosity. So cute!
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