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Post by Alliecat on Mar 22, 2010 10:54:19 GMT 10
Title: Intended Rating: G Length: 176 Competitor: Alanna Round/Fight: 3/A Summary: Alanna didn’t get exactly what she had intended to.
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I look at Neal and can’t help but think that I got the short end of the stick. Raoul gets to spend all his time with Keladry of Mindelan, the squire that I have lusted after for many years. I know that it would be impossible for me to be her knight-mistress, but I cannot help but wish that it was otherwise.
It is not fully Neal’s fault that I am so hostile to him. Sometimes I almost feel bad for him. Almost. It is not his fault that he is not my first choice squire, but it is his fault that he is so frustrating. Often I feel as if I am babysitting, not training him.
It is not what I wished for, but I will not give up. I will make a knight out of him, no matter how difficult it is. And once I finally do, I can become closer to Keladry of Mindelan and mentor her instead. I can make her the very best knight she can be, just as I intended.
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Post by Lisa on Mar 22, 2010 11:24:04 GMT 10
this fascinates me... the notion of the physical aspect being a driver. I really like that Kel and Alanna are kind of thinking the same thing at the same time.
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