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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 14, 2010 16:46:48 GMT 10
Title: Enjoying the View 1 Rating: PG Length: 113 words Competitor: Sabine Round/Fight: 2/C Summary: Sabine watches Kel.
Note: this takes place in the same AU as the Kel/Sabine fics I wrote for Round 1, where Sabine is just a couple of years older than Kel.
“Enjoying the view?”
Kel jumped. The voice was almost in her ear, and she didn't have to turn to know that it was Sabine. In the crowded ballroom, she hadn't heard the other girl approach.
“Whatever do you mean?” she asked, keeping her own voice low.
“He's pretty enough, but it's disgusting how obvious he is about his intentions.”
“Who..?”
“You know who I mean. Or did you think I haven't noticed who you've been watching?”
Now Kel turned to look at her friend. “It doesn't matter. He's betrothed, anyway. And are you watching him, or watching me?”
Sabine leaned even closer and answered, “Maybe both.”
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Post by greenie on Mar 17, 2010 13:24:02 GMT 10
This is a weird, random thing to pick up on, but for some reason, I liked the way that the very first line was the same as the title. Awesome start! You've got me hooked in.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Apr 11, 2010 8:42:01 GMT 10
Can't wait to see where this goes!
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