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Post by greenie on Mar 23, 2010 19:04:03 GMT 10
Title: Seaside 13 Rating: PG-13 Length: 157 Competitor: Sabine Round/Fight: 3/B Summary: Alanna refuses to let Kel escape.
“Wait!” Kel’s years of training recognised the order and she stopped. Disgusted with herself – she didn’t want to face the Lioness now, in fact, she didn’t really feel like facing anyone right now – she resisted the temptation to stay and kept on walking with the same brisk pace as before. “Curse it, I said wait,” snapped Alanna’s voice from behind her, and the next thing Kel knew, violet fire was slowing her movements. “That wasn’t fair,” Kel said quietly as Alanna drew close. “I don’t feel like talking.” “Well I don’t feel like having shorter legs than you, but I do,” the older woman snapped. Her face softened a little as she looked at Kel and she withdrew her magic. “Don’t be upset, let me explain.” Kel made sure that her face was smooth and expressionless. “I’m not upset,” she lied. It was better for everyone if she stayed out of it now. “I was…surprised, that’s all.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 24, 2010 22:12:24 GMT 10
I like how this one shows Kel and Alanna both as much less than their best -- Alanna abusing magic, Kel hiding her emotions.
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Post by greenie on Mar 24, 2010 23:17:17 GMT 10
Hee, that actually hadn't occurred to me! At least, I don't think it had. I can't really remember... :S And thanks so much for all your reviews!
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Apr 30, 2010 10:13:34 GMT 10
Kel's embarassment is so her. Sort of amusing, though I can't say I blame her. I want to see Alanna (attempt) to explain now...
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