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Post by Rachy on Mar 12, 2010 21:02:35 GMT 10
Title: Best Interests Rating: PG Length: 260 words. Competitor: Vania Round/Fight: 2/D Summary: Vania’s actions, while for the best interests, have unfavourable repercussions.
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She knows that Liam has returned.
She can tell by the heavily echoing sound that echoes through her chambers, the curse that follows, the whisper of fine carved steel from a leather sheath.
“What were you thinking?” Liam’s voice is raw, painful and cold, too loud.
“Of your best interests.”
“And of who shares your bed, right? You have half the palace chasing after you, tugging at the trailing thread of a gown over a simper directed at the person standing next to them. And yet that’s not enough for you. All you Mithros damned want is what you can’t have. Never mind if it’s your brother’s lover or your cousin’s best friend.”
“I can’t help what I want.”
“But you can stop yourself from getting it.”
“You wouldn’t have worked out in the long term. You know it.” Vania’s voice became softer.
“I never got a chance to find that out.”
“You aren’t meant to be loved then left all of the time. I’m better with flings then you are.”
“It wasn’t just a fling this time.” Liam fell silent, and she knew his thoughts. They weren’t so different from her own, of Keladry, the way the light shone across her hair, the shine of her gold jewellery in contrast to her tanned skin, the flutter of her eyelash against her cheek.
“I’ll suggest to Papa that he looks for your bethroed in Tusaine. They’re into the polyamority there.”
“Oh, get out.” Liam smiled bitterly, and Vania grinned back.
“Neither of us won, Vania. She’s gone to King’s Reach.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 13, 2010 0:37:13 GMT 10
I love their rivalry!
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Post by Katty on Mar 13, 2010 9:51:58 GMT 10
*heart breaks over the last line* I love this though - especially the "You aren’t meant to be loved then left all of the time. I’m better with flings then you are.” line <3 Absolutely divine, I hope we see more
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Post by Rachy on Mar 17, 2010 20:24:25 GMT 10
Thanks Kat: I felt a bit melodramatic having that in there, but I'm happy you liked it
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Rowena
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back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on May 2, 2010 8:00:47 GMT 10
I love how Vania and Liam don't get along. That's a weird thing to say but it's true, it's their rivalry instead of "partners in crime" attitude. The last line is perfect
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Hopeless
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I used to be Kel of King’s Reach. Then I decided hopeless was more accurate.
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Post by Hopeless on Oct 3, 2020 23:54:00 GMT 10
Can you do another??! This is great! Love YoungerContés!
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Hopeless
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Faleron Fan
I used to be Kel of King’s Reach. Then I decided hopeless was more accurate.
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Gender: Female
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Post by Hopeless on Oct 14, 2020 1:26:22 GMT 10
I love this bit:
And also this:
Edit: just realised I’ve already reviewed this. Oh well
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