laura
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Post by laura on Feb 2, 2010 9:08:11 GMT 10
Title: Green-Eyed Rating: PG Length: 100 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Ilane remembers. And Ilane envies.
a/n: Thanks, Lisa! I was kind of shocked at all the Dom fics, and after reading your plotbunny this kind of sprang up... Oops.
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You’re a mother, Ilane told herself, watching her gaily laughing daughters whirl across the ballroom floor among their peers. She fingered her gray hair with a sigh. Mothers give parts of themselves away, their hopes and dreams and memories to their children. A mother keeps nothing for herself. She is selfless.
But Ilane couldn’t help remembering, as she watched her youngest daughter dance with her new husband, the feeling of his strong teenage hands on her back, his wide mouth gently pressing kisses to her face… Wyldon of Cavall was not something she wanted to share with Keladry of Mindelan.
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ETA: Because people think in italics. Not in bold.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 2, 2010 9:17:28 GMT 10
Glorious! I love the idea of Ilane/Wyldon, and you explore it and its repercussions so very well here!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 2, 2010 10:02:54 GMT 10
Ouch! Poor Ilane...
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 2, 2010 10:53:33 GMT 10
Awesome!! I adore the idea of Wyldon/Ilane, and you've written it wonderfully.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 2, 2010 10:56:16 GMT 10
Yay!! I'm so glad someone ran with this, because I was mapping it in my mind and could not do it justice.
This is great!!
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Minuit
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Post by Minuit on Feb 2, 2010 11:39:51 GMT 10
Yay! *cheers* This is wonderful. But poor Ilane.
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Post by journeycat on Feb 2, 2010 11:58:28 GMT 10
Beautiful! I love that Kel/Wyldon is really the second pairing, and that you focus more on the interesting dynamics of Ilane/Wyldon.
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laura
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Post by laura on Feb 2, 2010 13:08:18 GMT 10
Thanks! I'm glad you loved it! Next to go: Piers/Wyldon.... nomnom
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