MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 1:56:58 GMT 10
Title: Knight in Shining Armor Rating: pg13 Length: 200 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Read Someone Honest first! Being a Knight doesn’t make you a good one, you have to do that yourself.
“Lady Knight, a word.” A strong hand gripped her upper arm and tugged her away from the practice yards at Mastiff. A strong, familiar scent enveloped her. It was comforting, like the firm presence at her side and the warm hand on her arm. “Sit.” She sat. They were in an office, though she only looked at her lap. “What has happened to you? You have been moping around Mastiff for a week, and what you asked me last night…. Did one of the soldiers take advantage of you? One of the knights, a higher up? “It was my own fault, I did it willingly enough. I liked him, I thought I loved him.” “No, if someone lied to you then it is not your fault. Lady Knight. Keladry.” Him saying her name made her look at him. “Kel.” He almost whispered her nickname, and in reverent tones at that. He knelt in front of her, gazing into her hazel eyes. “Not everyone is going to lie to you. Someone really does love you.” He hesitantly touched her face, then cupped her cheek. And when Wyldon kissed her, she understood that he did love her. And maybe, she loved him.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 4, 2010 9:15:46 GMT 10
Aww, very sweet.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 9:23:23 GMT 10
I love it when Wyldon is able to say "Kel" in fanfiction - it carries such weight because everyone *knows* he's not the type to use it.
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 9:47:52 GMT 10
Thank you, thank you. Me too, I only use it sparingly with him. It carries such weight, as you said. Did it make you feel better after Shattered? That wasn't him you know. It was Dom. The last bit just didn't go in for some reason. (Fixed it though)
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