MinPin
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Cavall SmutMistress in training
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 6:21:55 GMT 10
Title: Commands Rating: R Length: 100 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Learn to take commands, Kel. For Lisa.
It was a miserable day. It had been pouring buckets for three days, the wind was strong enough to tip a wagon, and she was covered with blood and mud and dripping on the expensive Carthaki rug. He didn’t care. She was short on temper, demanding to see him, sending the servants scurrying about with her orders. Fine by him. He wrapped his arms around her from behind, pressed his mouth to her neck and nibbled a little. “Learn to give commands,” He breathed against her skin. “You’ve done that. Now learn to take them.” “Yes sir,” She whispered, aroused.
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RosemaryBlue
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Warning: sometimes confuses fan-fiction with reality
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Post by RosemaryBlue on Feb 4, 2010 7:49:16 GMT 10
quite fabulously excellent! I'm inspired now!
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MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 8:09:59 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 4, 2010 8:21:16 GMT 10
Oh, this could go so many places!
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MinPin
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Cavall SmutMistress in training
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 8:24:59 GMT 10
It could. But that is up to you, anything else I might write would exceed the ratings allowed on this site.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 9:13:56 GMT 10
This was one of my favorites from the list, I admit.
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MinPin
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Cavall SmutMistress in training
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 9:53:02 GMT 10
Mine too.
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Minuit
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Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 10:32:58 GMT 10
Bahaha. Excelent
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