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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 13:51:51 GMT 10
Title: Regrets Rating: PG Length: 100 Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: There’s one thing in Kel’s life she wish she could change.
“Do you ever regret that I wasn’t a virgin the first time we made love?” Kel asked idly as she gazed out the window. Jump was curled up at her feet, happily accustomed to life at Cavall.
Wyldon looked up from his letter, surprised. “Why does it matter now?”
“Most men seem to be particular about these sorts of things. I have to admit,” Kel said, feeling surprisingly shy, despite the year they’d been together, “I almost wish I had been.”
Wyldon snorted and resumed reading. “Given what you told me of your unfortunate experiences with Masbolle, you practically were.”
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MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 13:59:59 GMT 10
Perfect. Absolutly perfect.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 4, 2010 14:01:06 GMT 10
So cute! And that last line, lol!! So perfectly Wyldon.
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Post by journeycat on Feb 4, 2010 14:01:07 GMT 10
Ahhhhhahahahahah! Oh, Lisa, I love it
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 14:04:07 GMT 10
Thanks, guys. I love Wyldon's frankness.
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Minuit
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 14:06:52 GMT 10
rofl. Perfect. Just perfect *smug grin*
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 14:12:42 GMT 10
Thanks, Sue.
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laura
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Post by laura on Feb 4, 2010 14:21:29 GMT 10
I died a little. Just died. Take that, Team Dom.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 14:26:18 GMT 10
Aww, I didn't mean to make it an attack, exactly. Just a, ah, response to the notion of Wyldon not being good in bed. Thanks!
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aurorax
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Post by aurorax on Feb 4, 2010 14:35:01 GMT 10
Haha love it! And beyond the "Wyldon is awesome" level, this is exactly the response that I'd expect from Kel, as opposed to say Alanna or Buri- I don't think she'd refuse to wait until she was married to sleep with someone (mostly since I don't see her marrying for a while), but I do think that she'd feel bad about it when she did finally settle down with someone. It's something I at least see her being conscious of, and I think your "I almost wish" captures that balance perfectly.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 14:37:39 GMT 10
Thank you, Ginger! I also see Kel the same way - marrying later, having sex before doing so, but still being a little wistful about "traditional" approaches to life.
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Post by greenie on Feb 4, 2010 14:39:29 GMT 10
*snorts* Ahaha, that's brilliant!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 14:44:01 GMT 10
Thanks!
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