Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 11:49:41 GMT 10
Title: Obedience Rated: R Length: 138 Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Kel learns a different kind of obedience.
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Kel knew that the first duty for anyone in service to the crown is obedience, but she was also positive that this was not what they had in mind when they taught her that.
But here she was, being obedient. She was also naked, in Wyldon’s office, bent over in a completely unsteady and undignified position, and not at all sure if the door was locked or not. She should just get up. There was nothing stopping her. Just get up, and walk away – after getting dressed first of course (if she could find her clothes that is).
But she didn’t. She held still. She obeyed. Why? It was all because of five little words, just five. “Don’t move. Wait for me.” Wyldon had whispered them in her ear, before walking out – too many long agonising minutes ago.
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RosemaryBlue
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Warning: sometimes confuses fan-fiction with reality
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Post by RosemaryBlue on Feb 4, 2010 12:03:49 GMT 10
*covers eyes* I'm quite sure that mental image will never go away. The first line is absolutely amazingly killer hook.
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MinPin
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Cavall SmutMistress in training
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 12:35:32 GMT 10
There should be another. Wyldon's an honorable man, he wouldn't leave her like that forever. Very nicely done.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 12:46:33 GMT 10
You're killing me. I love it!
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 13:50:38 GMT 10
Thank you And no, Wyldon' wouldn't leave her like that for long But I'm not sure if I'm brave enough to attempt a sequel.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 13:58:14 GMT 10
I didn't realize that his office was part of Wyldon's Dungeon!
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 14:02:49 GMT 10
lol Lisa Well, I'm sure more than a few knights have felt terrified/intimidated in Wyldon's office before, so ...
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Post by Rosie on Feb 4, 2010 16:49:47 GMT 10
Ahh, you're brilliant (and I can see I don't even need to ask for a sequel!!).
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 20:49:32 GMT 10
thanks so much
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