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Post by greenie on Feb 4, 2010 19:23:36 GMT 10
Title: Dare Rating: PG-13 Length: 133 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Dom has a dare to carry out.
“Hello, Kel.” Kel turned around. “Dom! Hello. What are you doing here?” “Well…to cut a long story short, I ended up with the whole of Third Company daring me to kiss you. On the lips. And they’ll never ever let me live it down if I don’t.” Kel blushed. “Well, I better let you do it then, hadn’t I?” “That would be nice.” Dom swallowed and leaned in, gripping her shoulders, and pressed his mouth to hers. She drank in his smell, the taste of his lips, and all too soon he was letting go. “Thanks, Kel,” he said. “That was, er…nice. Really nice.” Kel smiled and turned to go. “Hey, Dom,” she called over her shoulder. “What?” “You should tell Third Company that next time, they should dare you to bed me.”
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Post by zbilja on Feb 4, 2010 19:26:01 GMT 10
I love the light, but still romantic tread running all through this. Lovely!
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Post by Katty on Feb 4, 2010 19:39:36 GMT 10
hahahaha! Love it!
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Post by Verasque on Feb 4, 2010 20:07:51 GMT 10
Last line takes the gold
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Bec
Queen's Rider
Most likely procrastinating
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Post by Bec on Feb 4, 2010 20:09:14 GMT 10
i agree the last line is awesome
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