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Post by kiz on Feb 4, 2010 18:25:52 GMT 10
Title: To Bed a Commander: II Rating: PG-13 Length: 110 words Competitor: Dom Fight/round: 1A Summary: This is an experiment. It is the counterpart to "To Bed a Commander," written from Kel's perspective.
Kel wonders if she ought to be tentative with Dom at first. She is struck by his beauty, and worries that he might find her lacking, might want somebody small and pretty (someone with dimples, a jealous fear that Kel has never quite been able to shake). She worries that her body, so skilled in pattern dances, will prove itself ungainly and clumsy in the bedroom.
But when they fall into bed, Kel finds herself responding to Dom like a sunflower at dawn, and she only has room for passion, finds herself effortlessly taking control and cying out: “More.”
And everything she asks for, Dom gives.
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Post by zbilja on Feb 4, 2010 18:28:42 GMT 10
Counterparts! Yay! We need more of these! (And more Dom fics, too.) Maybe another fic, from Neal's POV? Screams might be heard.
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Post by Verasque on Feb 4, 2010 18:55:21 GMT 10
Ugh, just fulfilling. I love her small jealous fear about the dimples. It was just so Kel
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