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Post by kiz on Feb 4, 2010 18:17:11 GMT 10
Title: To Bed a Commander Rating: R Length: 110 words Competitor: Dom Fight/round: 1A Summary: Dom finds he enjoys an even match.
It was something else, Dom decided, to bed another commander. The married noblewomen he had been with in the past were all demure charm, sly manipulation, careful passivity. He couldn’t deny that he had enjoyed those dalliances, and yet, he wistfully wished for somebody who was straightforward.
Kel was the answer to his prayers. Her command between the sheets did not surprise, although it did please him. Her passion caught him unaware. Beneath that meltwater-cool exterior was a hot thread of fire, erupting through thrusts and moans and Kel’s exquisite gasp: “More”.
It was a command that Dom was all to happy to oblige.
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Post by zbilja on Feb 4, 2010 18:21:23 GMT 10
Oh my!
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Post by Verasque on Feb 4, 2010 18:53:16 GMT 10
Sinfully written. This was a delight to read
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