MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 5, 2010 1:53:24 GMT 10
Title: Wedding Rating: G Length: 158 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: He watches her as she marries him.
She was stunning. Kel wasn’t the kind of woman thought to be a beauty, but she really was. And never had she been more beautiful than right at that moment, standing in the Goddess’s temple in Corus, marrying him.
Her hair was a little longer, down to her shoulders, because there had been nothing to really fight since the Scanran war. He almost couldn’t believe she was wearing makeup, but she liked the Tortallan take on Yamani makeup. Her formal, pale blue dress with its white lawn kirtle and silver-white crepe over-robe looked lovely against her tanned skin and brown hair.
And the smile on her face! It was incredible, he had never seen her smile like that before. He guessed that only real love could bring it out. Real love…. Him! He could hardly believe it.
Dom wasn’t sure what Kel saw in Lord Wyldon, but it must have been good to make her smile like that.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 5, 2010 8:54:41 GMT 10
Aww. Yay, wedding fic!
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Alexi
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Post by Alexi on Feb 5, 2010 9:54:58 GMT 10
I like how it seems to be told from Wyldon's pov until the last line.
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