MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 6:12:25 GMT 10
Title: Wedding Dress Rating: Pg13 Length: 169 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Wyldon likes Kel's dress. Note: Blame Lisa, I should not have been left alone with those lists. Historical Note: Before the Victorian Era, women did not wear white, and ususally they wore something they already owned. They just added some nice lace or a new forepart/kirtle and some beading.
“Da! Go away! It’s bad luck to see her in the dress before the wedding!” Margarry put one hand over her father’s eyes and used the other to try to push him out the door. Sunni came and helped. “Girls, it’s important.” He waved a very official looking piece of parchment. I would like a moment alone with the Lady Knight.” “But Da!” “Now Margarry, Sunni.” The girls left, grumbling. “News from the capital, Wyldon?” Kel smoothed the front of her dress, a little self conscious. “What, this?” He waved the paper again. “No, this is a bill of sale for a few of my dogs.” “Well why did you send them away? It really is bad luck for you to see me in this before the wedding.” “Nothing about that dress could possibly be unlucky, Keladry.” Wyldon pulled his soon-to-be wife into his arms. ~*~ “Wyldon, I thought you liked my dress.” “I love the dress.” “That explains why it’s in a crumpled heap halfway across the room.”
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Post by Rosie on Feb 4, 2010 8:34:59 GMT 10
Love the ending
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 9:12:50 GMT 10
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MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 9:53:46 GMT 10
I thought most people would like that part. I'm glad everyone does.
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Minuit
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 21:16:43 GMT 10
*grins* the ending's perfect
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Post by zbilja on Feb 4, 2010 21:17:51 GMT 10
*grins* the ending's perfect I must agree.
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Post by MinPin on Feb 5, 2010 0:15:32 GMT 10
Why thank you!
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