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Post by Verasque on Feb 4, 2010 19:52:57 GMT 10
Title: Fairytale Rating: G Length: 141 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: The love story of Kel and Dom. Crack!fic as per demanded.
Kel loves Dom so much, with his pretty blue eyes and black hair that make her heart go aflutter with hope and pleasure. He came into her life like a supernova, his blinding charm and affection easily making him the man of her dreams. She never hoped that someone like him would ever love someone like her. But destiny decreed otherwise, and he left the Own and everything that ever defined him or meant anything to him just to be with her forever.
And so she says yes when he gets down on one knee in front of the WHOLE country (even the King and Queen!) and presents her with a big shiny bling that only a prince could afford. It doesn’t matter: he’s her prince, and she’s his princess, and together they will set the world on fire.
The End. PLZREVIEW! I worked $o0o hard on diz! Ktnxbai =)))))
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Post by Katty on Feb 4, 2010 19:54:14 GMT 10
*iz ded*
ETA: Dis iz oarsom. WR!TE MOAR!
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Post by kiz on Feb 4, 2010 19:57:16 GMT 10
lololo soOoO good!!!! dom/kel 4eva!1! sequel?!?!?!
Although really, if you ignore the hyperbole and lack of paragraph breaks, it's actually not that bad. Your talent cannot be stifled, Joa!
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Post by zbilja on Feb 4, 2010 20:09:05 GMT 10
I must agree.
The only thing you need to put in now, is ''MY FIRST FF SO PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ REVIEW PLZ" and "a serten blueeyed sargent."
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Post by kiz on Feb 4, 2010 20:10:08 GMT 10
That, and "NO FLAMES PLZ".
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Post by Bec on Feb 4, 2010 20:15:15 GMT 10
y r We writing LYk dIs? lol i can't even do it it reminds me of year 7 (shakes head)
Anyways i quite liked it write more Dom!
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Post by zbilja on Feb 4, 2010 20:36:35 GMT 10
'coz were tryin vry vry hrd 2 b noobies. 'Coz joa's fic iz awesume.
Kiz - oh yeah, 4got that 1!
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 4, 2010 21:51:29 GMT 10
Awsum fic! Liek dis lots.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 4, 2010 23:03:17 GMT 10
Heehee. It's early, so it took me a couple of sentences to get it... first I was like, "Supernova? Really, Joa?" But then I got to the part about destiny, and suddenly the cracky brilliance came shining through.
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Post by Katty on Feb 4, 2010 23:36:10 GMT 10
*oh* I get it now, its supposed to be literal! VERY SMUTTY JOA!
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Post by Zanna-Banna on Feb 5, 2010 8:10:36 GMT 10
I lov it! hilarous!
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