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Post by Lisa on Feb 5, 2010 1:04:58 GMT 10
Title: Women & Men Rating: PG-13 Length: 119 Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: He’s a filthy hypocrite. This one’s for Mandi, who wanted infidelity sex. (sorry it’s more in his head than in his bed!)
The difference between men and women, he had discovered on his journey through life, came down to sex and love. A man could forgive his wife loving outside of marriage, so long as she didn’t sleep with the other man. A woman, on the other hand, could forgive sex, eventually, as long as there was never any love.
He reminded himself of this fact every time he found himself tangled in Keladry’s bed sheets, pressing himself against her and reveling in the sensation of her lips on his flesh. It wasn’t love – it never had been, and it never would be.
Conveniently, he ignored the hypocrisy that he would not be able to forgive Vivenne for the same thing.
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MinPin
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Cavall SmutMistress in training
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Post by MinPin on Feb 5, 2010 1:44:02 GMT 10
He can't resist Kel! Nicely written. Kinda sad though.
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Post by journeycat on Feb 5, 2010 2:06:19 GMT 10
Ohhh, I just adored this. And I also love the first paragraph - I think it's so very true. Beautiful writing, as usual And head-infidelity-sex is just as gorgeous as bed-infidelity-sex!
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Post by Rosie on Feb 5, 2010 8:36:22 GMT 10
Ooh, this made me a bit shivery. Very interesting insight into this, makes me wonder how his respective women feel. I love every little bit of this drabble!
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 5, 2010 8:50:40 GMT 10
Oh this is lovely! Beautifully written.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 5, 2010 10:09:03 GMT 10
I think they'd heartily disagree. Thanks, everyone!!
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Minuit
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Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Feb 5, 2010 11:32:56 GMT 10
I simply adore this perspective on things. Great work.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 5, 2010 13:09:56 GMT 10
Thank you, Sue!!
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