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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 22:45:25 GMT 10
Title: A New Kind of Warfare Rating: R Length: 231 Competitor: Wyldon Summary: At least I didn’t bring up battering rams…
He had once told Kel that his technique was flawed. But she jousted with him, and was knocked flat on her back. Now, flat on her back again, thanks to his actions, she had time to think about his technique.
She’d always known that he was a thorough man, but putting their relationship in the bedroom showed her how thorough he could be. His movements, everything from the light kisses he dropped on her eyelids to the deliberate teasing strokes of his fingers on her thighs, were intended to be a complete assault on her body. Like in warfare, there were strategies and there were tactics, and she suspected that he rarely held back.
Being back in the palace had its merits. Instead of being out in the field, where walls were thin and men gossiped even more than the ladies at court, she’d had to bite back every moan and whimper. And here she could hold on to the headboard, bracing herself for the onslaught of hands and tongue and teeth. Best of all, here they had time. There were no patrols, no scouting, no supplies. They had hours to revel in each other’s bodies, to discover new things about their preferences.
As his mouth moved lower, over her ribs, past her navel, and down to – oh, sweet merciful mother, she could honestly say that his technique was not flawed.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 4, 2010 22:53:45 GMT 10
*squeeeee* Oh this is all sorts of awesome! I love how this isn't set in wartime though, and I adore the way you make the parallels between his battle and lovemaking skills.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 22:54:28 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by greenie on Feb 4, 2010 22:57:45 GMT 10
Awesome fic! All the little comparisons and parallels made me grin.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 23:07:44 GMT 10
Thanks, Ren!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 4, 2010 23:08:54 GMT 10
Wyldon must be good at everything.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 4, 2010 23:11:40 GMT 10
Indeed. I'm pretty sure he is.
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Minuit
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Post by Minuit on Feb 4, 2010 23:45:32 GMT 10
*Squeee* Oh my, ♥ this so much! Perfection.
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Post by MinPin on Feb 5, 2010 0:01:14 GMT 10
Love it! Where's the favorite button when you need it?
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Post by journeycat on Feb 5, 2010 1:47:43 GMT 10
Oh, this is all kinds of delicious I have to agree with Isha and Ren and say that the little comparisons with his warfare technique were amazing.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 5, 2010 11:23:41 GMT 10
Unable to respond coherently, brain = mush.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 5, 2010 13:09:32 GMT 10
Thanks, everyone!
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