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Post by Sam-and-antha on Feb 5, 2010 18:00:28 GMT 10
Title: Knights Who Play Dress UP Rating: G Length: 164 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Kel Never felt she Could be a girl and a Knight t the sametime until she met Dom ( I mean girl as in feminine) (ps. Are we winning yet?!)
Kel was never able to be a girl. There were times when she wanted nothing more than to put on a dress, play in face paints, and watch everyone’s shocked expressions. Because she couldn’t be a girl she was either sexless or just one of the boys. That was all she had ever really known. At social events she always felt so small. A knight playing dress up pushed aside like a flower on the wall. They never ask her name. Never ask her to dance, or go for walks. Nobody sees the girl without a face, a stranger in her own skin. But she was sure there had to be somebody somewhere to take her as she was; the Lioness had found someone hadn’t she? It seemed like there was no one for her though, until she found him; somebody to make her feel at home, somebody who wanted to understand. Now she found her place, and she will never be the same.
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Post by zbilja on Feb 5, 2010 18:10:55 GMT 10
Hmm... Good, but I think the ending was a tad rushed.
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Post by Sam-and-antha on Feb 5, 2010 18:14:54 GMT 10
its the truth, I didn't know how to end it. The song I was inspired by just kept getting depressing and didn't have a happy ending!
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