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Post by Lisa on Feb 5, 2010 13:40:20 GMT 10
Title: The Whole World Smiles With You Rating: G Length: 113 Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: She’s unaware.
It catches him off guard – she tosses him a smile and his world is knocked off its axis. It is the smallest thing, the curving of two full lips and the roundness of two flushing cheeks. Hardly anything to cause notice, let alone devastation.
But there he stands, utterly changed. He watches her joke with men, handing them the same smile she’d just thrown his way. She has no idea how much power she has in such a simple gesture, how much could be done with youth and an utter unawareness of beauty. It is as if it is nothing. And to her, it probably is.
To him, it’s suddenly the whole world.
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Post by journeycat on Feb 5, 2010 13:57:41 GMT 10
This is full of all kinds of pretty - I love the quiet epiphany, and the details he suddenly notices.
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Minuit
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Helping George out of the Closet
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Post by Minuit on Feb 5, 2010 14:00:51 GMT 10
So simple, yet so amazing! *bows in awe*
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Post by Rosie on Feb 6, 2010 5:36:50 GMT 10
Really lovely - I love that he abruptly notices her interactions with other men, and Kel being oblivious.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 6, 2010 6:51:57 GMT 10
Thank you, guys.
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