MinPin
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Post by MinPin on Feb 4, 2010 1:45:48 GMT 10
Title: Someone Honest Rating: pg13 Length:136words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Read Shattered first! Sometimes all you need is someone to be honest with you.
She was in a daze for a while after that night. Everyone knew it, but no one knew why. “A word, Lady Knight?” She was so distracted that she couldn’t even tell who had asked. She just nodded and followed him out of the mess. He had lied. “Are you well? You seem…off.” “I’m fine. My head hurts a little.” “Have the men been bothering you? Some of them are agitated.” “No, it’s alright.” “Very well.” He walked back to the mess. “Wait! Can I ask you something?” “What is it Lady Knight?” “Does sleeping with someone you aren’t married to make you a whore, if they lied to you to get you to do it?” “No.” He sounded stunned. At her asking, or at her admitting it? She couldn’t tell. “Thank you.” She walked away.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 6, 2010 1:19:57 GMT 10
Ooh, very emotional writing!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 6, 2010 7:12:21 GMT 10
I like the latent anger! (at least, that's how I'm reading it...)
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