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Post by journeycat on Feb 5, 2010 14:06:20 GMT 10
Title: Whirlwind Rating: R Length: 107 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: For the first time, Wyldon is powerless.
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They were a tangle of limbs and scandal, and he couldn’t escape.
His hands ripped open the front of her shirt of their own volition, baring her flesh for his lips to taste. Her nails raked his back as she arched against him, but they didn’t hurt him; it only inflamed his desire. Her stomach clenched as his hands stroked her sensitive, quivering flesh.
She met his mouth for a hot kiss, and with her hands clutching at his back, her legs wrapped around his hips, he gave himself into the moment, and tried not to think too hard about the consequences of his loss of control.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 6, 2010 1:17:45 GMT 10
Very powerful first line! Great piece.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 6, 2010 6:36:51 GMT 10
Yay, smut!! You obeyed my texty demands! (Gods, that first line - damn!)
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Post by Katty on Feb 6, 2010 23:33:14 GMT 10
I love the opening line!!
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 9, 2010 22:42:31 GMT 10
Awesome fic - I love the last line!
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