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Post by Lisa on Feb 14, 2010 1:22:49 GMT 10
Title: Bruise Balm (II) Rating: PG Length: 104 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 1/C Summary: He has healing hands.
“Lay down,” he suggests, motioning to his bed.
She hesitates, too aware of the sudden flush of heat that spreads – to her face, to other places that should have nothing to do with Raoul of Goldenlake – to feel comfortable on his bed.
He pulls out a jar of bruise balm. “Now, Kel.”
Sighing, she lies down upon his bed, face down. He sits down next to her and pulls her shirt up, rubbing some of the balm into what feel like her worst contusions. His hands are surprisingly soft on her flesh, and she wonders if his lips are as gentle as his hands.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 14, 2010 2:07:12 GMT 10
Sounds like it's almost worth getting injured for Love it!
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Post by journeycat on Feb 14, 2010 2:33:58 GMT 10
Oooh I already like where this is going! I love her reaction to him too.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 14, 2010 2:38:36 GMT 10
Totally worth getting injured for Rosie. It's kind of fun to write Kel/Raoul, because I think: "what would I do?" Thanks!
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 14, 2010 8:58:34 GMT 10
"other places that should have nothing to do with Raoul of Goldenlake"... Good job!
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 14, 2010 22:34:47 GMT 10
^ I adore that line too. And the last line is just awesome!
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Kit
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Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 14, 2010 23:15:27 GMT 10
Beautiful
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 0:57:50 GMT 10
Thanks, guys!!
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