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Post by Lisa on Feb 14, 2010 1:07:19 GMT 10
Title: Tilting (I) Rating: PG Length: 114 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 1/C Summary: It’s actually not about euphemisms! (these will be sequential, but should stand alone... and they're ALL dedicated to Mandi!! ) “It’s been too long since we last jousted,” Kel groans. She walks stiffly back to Raoul’s quarters, ignoring his laughs. “It’s been too long since I saw you dumped on your rump.” “And my bottom thanks you for the pleasure.” He laughs again, and she tries to ignore how much she likes his pink cheeks and his sparkling dark eyes. “Come now, Kel. Certainly you’ve been knocked around by Lord Wyldon a few times in the last few years.” She looks up at him, her expression dry. “I haven’t had much time for tilting, Raoul.” He pats her on her bruised backside. “I’ve got balm in my room,” he says, pushing open the door.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 14, 2010 2:05:50 GMT 10
<3 I love their relationship, and how he brings playfulness to her work.
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Post by journeycat on Feb 14, 2010 2:21:38 GMT 10
*gutters* I don't believe you when you say there aren't any euphemisms involved I love how well you establish their banter!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 14, 2010 2:37:07 GMT 10
Thanks, guys! This seriously *isn't* about the euphamisms - I can't be held responsible if you perv it up.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 14, 2010 8:53:53 GMT 10
This is very good, a well-written sweet moment between them
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 14, 2010 22:33:05 GMT 10
I love the banter in this. And I'm with Mandi on the euphemisms.
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 14, 2010 23:03:32 GMT 10
perving it up cheerfully, loving minute. *grin*
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 0:57:26 GMT 10
*grin* Thanks, everyone. There's really no need for euphamisms, because you'll be smut-attacked soon enough.
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