April
Message Runner
Love is the only force capable of transforming an enemy into friend
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Post by April on Feb 13, 2010 11:59:21 GMT 10
Title: Love lost and love found Rating: PG-13 Length: 159 words Competitor: Raoul Round: 1/c Summary: To love or not to love Notes: Thanks so much to Katty for Betaing for me
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Standing on the balcony she spots him sitting alone. She wishes she could go to him, to comfort him. She can, in a way but it’s not the way she wants. She wants to hold him, she wants to take away his pain. SHE left him; she doesn’t deserve him if she can’t see how special he is. On the outside he may be a big tough giant-killer, but on the inside he is a like everyone else. Longing for comfort, longing for love. They are so alike and have always understood each other; even when she was a Squire, she admired him. From that it unknowingly grew - until this moment. Now that she knows what she’s feeling, she only has to work up the courage to act on it. She stands there, running though all the reasons to go over to him and all the reasons not to. Kel sticks out her chin, squares her shoulders and decides to act; “Why not, you only live once”.
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Bec
Queen's Rider
Most likely procrastinating
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Post by Bec on Feb 13, 2010 12:03:42 GMT 10
Aw, Cute
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Post by jazzyjess on Feb 13, 2010 17:20:12 GMT 10
Very sweet! I love Kel's hesitation.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 14, 2010 1:18:49 GMT 10
I like the moment where she's weighing everything - all the reason to go or not go to him.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 14, 2010 9:06:56 GMT 10
Good job I'm glad she decided to go for it.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 14, 2010 22:47:22 GMT 10
Cute fic!
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 14, 2010 22:59:01 GMT 10
Very cute fic, and an excellent 'weighing', as Lisa said. You can really feel her choice.
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