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Post by emberrose on Feb 14, 2010 16:23:29 GMT 10
Title: His Squire Rating: PG 13? Length: 209 Competitor: Raoul Round: 1/C Summary: Set during Squire, the griffin has wreaked havoc on Kel's room and Raoul has a problematic realization.
"Amazing, the skills a fellow picks up in forty years of bachelordom, don't you think?"
Raoul closed the door to Kel's room behind him and walked slowly across his study, the dining room, and then into his room, closing the door behind him. Hands pulling at his hair, he leaned back against the door and slid to the floor. He was losing his mind. Her dreamy hazel eyes staring at him in confusion had almost led him to lean in and... He squeezed his eyes shut. She was his squire for Mithros' sake! It's not like either of you have much of a reputation... Everyone thinks you're sleeping with her anyways... Raoul groaned, he needed to to remove the vision of her enchanting hazel eyes from his mind. He needed to stop imagining the soft kisses he longed to trace over the griffin scars on her hands and fingers. He needed to stop dreaming about their jousting together in the dark seclusion of his rooms... Raoul threw his head back into the door and winced. He needed to get out.
He found Buri in his favorite hidden training yard and almost turned away, but then... They were friends. They were more than that really, best friends. Comrades in arms...
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Post by darkakane on Feb 14, 2010 17:39:31 GMT 10
That is so sweet, I'd love to see a sequel...
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Post by Rosie on Feb 14, 2010 21:46:28 GMT 10
Very nice! You show Raoul's frustration really well.
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 14, 2010 23:16:38 GMT 10
Agreed!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 1:11:02 GMT 10
I have to agree, as well - the barrage on his brain is perfect.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 15, 2010 2:48:17 GMT 10
I like it, it's very sweet for Raoul and fun to read.
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Post by emberrose on Feb 15, 2010 5:05:55 GMT 10
Thanks so much! This actually my first time ever posting fanfic, glad it turned out well!
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