Post by Lisa on Feb 16, 2010 23:53:27 GMT 10
Title: Third Time’s a Charm (XX)
Rating: R
Length: 111 words
Competitor: Raoul
Round/Fight: 1/C
Summary: Even in bliss, she can’t get away from her doubts and fears.
In the light of dawn, they have sex a third time. It’s not the frenzied exchange of touches, nor the slow lovemaking of the night before. He takes her from behind, as they have slept through the night, his large hand presses against her abdomen, pulling her close every time he moves deeper within her. His movements drive her mad, especially when he slows down, tantalizing her. She pleads for more, clutching at any part of him within her reach.
And as her entire body shudders from sheer physical joy, she wonders, for the briefest moment, why her heart looks for this attention from men she can never have to herself.
Rating: R
Length: 111 words
Competitor: Raoul
Round/Fight: 1/C
Summary: Even in bliss, she can’t get away from her doubts and fears.
In the light of dawn, they have sex a third time. It’s not the frenzied exchange of touches, nor the slow lovemaking of the night before. He takes her from behind, as they have slept through the night, his large hand presses against her abdomen, pulling her close every time he moves deeper within her. His movements drive her mad, especially when he slows down, tantalizing her. She pleads for more, clutching at any part of him within her reach.
And as her entire body shudders from sheer physical joy, she wonders, for the briefest moment, why her heart looks for this attention from men she can never have to herself.
But that last line was so sad... poor Kel 
Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!