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Post by emberrose on Feb 14, 2010 19:41:04 GMT 10
Title: Kennan Rating: G Length: 126 Competitor: Raoul Round: 1/C Summary: Raoul threatens Cleon
Raoul wasn’t blind. He even believed that he had noticed that Kennan lad’s attraction to his squire before she did. He wondered how Kel could have trained with boys aged ten through fourteen—nineteen if one counted Queenscove—and not know when a boy was infatuated with a girl. Then he remembered that this was Kel, and she had trained as one of the boys. Of course she wouldn’t notice. When he discovered she reciprocated his feelings his heart had clenched. If he hurt her… So he’d spoken to her of the complications women warriors faced when dealing with romance—and then he’d left her to find that Kennan boy. If he hurt her, he promised the very pale-faced boy squirming before him he’d send him flying of his horse to Scanra.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 14, 2010 21:40:16 GMT 10
Hah! I love this side of Raoul.
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 14, 2010 23:31:46 GMT 10
Excellent!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 1:10:05 GMT 10
Eee, over-protective Raoul is quite yummy, isn't he?
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 15, 2010 3:41:40 GMT 10
Then he remembered that this was Kel, and she had trained as one of the boys. Of course she wouldn’t notice. so true! The idea of Raoul threatening Cleon makes me much happier than it should. Great job!
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Post by emberrose on Feb 15, 2010 5:08:33 GMT 10
Thanks!
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