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Post by Lisa on Feb 16, 2010 10:14:32 GMT 10
Title: Three’s a Crowd (XVI) Rating: PG-13 Length: 122 words Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 1/C Summary: Kel worries, again, about Buri - and Raoul reassures her.
“I should probably go back to my rooms,” Kel says with a sigh.
“Stay here.”
“I can’t.”
“Aren’t you worried about what people will say?”
“By people, do you mean Buri? I told you that she’s fine with this.”
Kel sits up and reaches for her shirt. “Maybe being fine in concept is easier than actually walking in and finding another woman in her husband’s bed.”
“What do you think she would do if she walked in right now?”
“I think she’d be upset.”
“I think she’d want to join in.”
Kel looks over her shoulder at him, one eyebrow raised. “She would?”
He smiles back at her. “It’s come up in our conversations before.”
“So I should stay?”
“You should stay.”
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 16, 2010 10:33:20 GMT 10
*is speechless* I forgot to mention how I like these only-dialouge, or almost only-dialouge entries at a contrast with the almost-no dialouge entries. They're very fun to read.
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Post by journeycat on Feb 17, 2010 1:46:28 GMT 10
Yes! Buri is such a good sport that she totally would.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 17, 2010 23:18:11 GMT 10
I'd like to think so.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 18, 2010 23:33:59 GMT 10
I've done a bad job of commenting this round, but I love this series! I'm looking forward to re-reading it in order at some point. ;D
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Post by Lisa on Feb 19, 2010 23:06:28 GMT 10
Thanks! I'll be posting it on TKO soon enough, as one piece. I appreciate your commenting now!
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