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Post by journeycat on Feb 23, 2010 15:26:06 GMT 10
Title: Heroes and Thieves Rating: G Length: 132 words Competitor: Joren Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: Heroes & Thieves by Vanessa Carlton. Give me a year or two And I'll mend my ways And see these mistakes And when I see the truth Darling, trust me, when I can see I'll be coming back ----- They say that the last word a man cries before his death is mother. Joren never thought that he would cry out any name, and he certainly did not think he would die. Failure had never crossed his mind. He was the pride of Stone Mountain, and the pride was in his bearing and burned into his soul. So when his Ordeal became his judgement day and he was found lacking in some way, a crack in everything that he was, it came as an utter surprise to him. Right before his world turned to black, he saw a face rise before his eyes, his bane and his downfall and his greatest failure of all. The last word Joren cried before the Chamber stole his life and his final breath was Mindelan. ----- 'Cause there are heroes and thieves at my door I can't seem to tell them apart anymore And just when I figured it out Darling it's you I'm without
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Post by max on Feb 23, 2010 15:29:41 GMT 10
Oh wow. That final line sent a shiver through me.
Incredible.
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