Post by darkakane on Mar 4, 2010 9:48:44 GMT 10
Title: He Saw - Jealousy
Rating: G
Length: 115 words
Competitor: Raoul
Round/Fight: 2/A
Summary: Raoul watches his squire. 1 of 3
His eyes followed her around the camp, watching her interaction with his men, his gaze lingering perhaps longer than decent on her womanly figure and messy braided hair he’d love to untangle and feel through his fingers.
One of his sergeants turned to her with a charming smile, flick of his hair and a witty remark on his lips. He watched as she laughed, a light flush staining her face accompanied with an almost imperceptible shiver rolling through her body, a reply on her perfect lips.
He stared jealously at the couple who were not yet a couple, and wished with everything he had that he could be in the sergeant’s place in her affections.
Rating: G
Length: 115 words
Competitor: Raoul
Round/Fight: 2/A
Summary: Raoul watches his squire. 1 of 3
His eyes followed her around the camp, watching her interaction with his men, his gaze lingering perhaps longer than decent on her womanly figure and messy braided hair he’d love to untangle and feel through his fingers.
One of his sergeants turned to her with a charming smile, flick of his hair and a witty remark on his lips. He watched as she laughed, a light flush staining her face accompanied with an almost imperceptible shiver rolling through her body, a reply on her perfect lips.
He stared jealously at the couple who were not yet a couple, and wished with everything he had that he could be in the sergeant’s place in her affections.
Very powerful.
Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!