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Post by wordy on Mar 4, 2010 8:55:00 GMT 10
Title: Three's A Crowd Rating: PG13 Length: 191 Competitor: Faleron Round/Fight: 2A Summary: Kel makes a decision - or a mistake? - that leaves her with mixed feelings.
“Kel – are you sure?” Faleron’s eyes were concerned, though she could tell he wanted to. She took a breath and nodded.
They didn’t speak. Every sigh that escaped her—every gasp, every shudder of pleasure—was loaded with guilty ecstasy. When their eyes met in the final throes of passion, she couldn’t look away, though the sight of his clear green eyes filled her with a shameful sting that cut its way straight to her heart.
After, she sat on the edge of the bed, sheet clutched at her chest. He didn’t touch her, though she felt his presence, and the heat of his skin, close beside her. She didn’t ask what he was feeling. She didn’t want to know. Maybe she had been selfish, and stupid, for wanting that brief moment of happiness. The two of them had never spoken that word—marriage—or mentioned his name. That wasn’t what filled Kel with guilt and regret, though. What filled Kel with regret for what they had done had nothing to do with her husband, and everything to do with the fact that she wanted to do it again. And again.
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Post by ubiquitous on Mar 4, 2010 9:08:49 GMT 10
Aww, poor Kel (and Fal). I love the descriptiveness of this. Wonderful fic.
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Post by journeycat on Mar 4, 2010 11:56:17 GMT 10
Guilty!sex is amazing, and you wrote it so well.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 4, 2010 13:06:33 GMT 10
Aw, I'm swooning over this a bit. And I love that her husband could be anyone.
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Post by wordy on Mar 4, 2010 13:13:48 GMT 10
Thanks guys! ;D
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Post by Lisa on Mar 4, 2010 13:38:39 GMT 10
Oh, infidelity is so tasty.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 4, 2010 17:00:24 GMT 10
My heart hurts for all three - Faleron, Kel, and her unnamed hubby! Very well done.
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Post by max on Mar 4, 2010 19:00:50 GMT 10
Ohh I want to know who the husband is.
Brilliantly done!
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