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Post by max on Mar 4, 2010 17:38:33 GMT 10
Title: Akinesis Rating: PG Length: 180 Competitor: Faleron Round/Fight: 2/A Summary: A proposition. Cagey ages.
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I want you to listen: In a moment I am going to suggest we leave the Hare before it gets too crowded, and on the way back to the Palace I am going to ask if we can walk through the temple district because the Starsworn festival is on and you didn’t grow up in Tortall and the mage lights form a floating canopy across the streets like a tunnel all the way to the stars, and when you turn to ask me how I know of this or to thank me for showing it to you or something else like that I am going to kiss you, because I’ve wanted to since those three weeks of the year when we were both 13 and I said that practically made us kin and the wind was in your hair and you smiled. And you have a thing about being snuck up on so I’m telling you outright, so you don’t go all still on me and don’t kiss me back. Because I really want you to kiss me back, Kel.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 4, 2010 17:42:01 GMT 10
Very interesting point of view - I like the style.
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Post by wordy on Mar 4, 2010 20:12:21 GMT 10
I agree, this is an interesting style, but it works really reallly well! I love it
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