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Post by wordy on Mar 4, 2010 21:15:46 GMT 10
Title: Bad Romance Rating: G Length: 169 Competitor: Faleron Round/Fight: 2A Summary: Caught in a bad romance...
He can tell they’ve been fighting again. He can always tell, by her eyes (the way they slide away when you look at her, bloodshot from lack of sleep, and rimmed red by held back tears) and by her lips (the way she presses them together in a thin line, to keep from speaking or crying).
He has never asked about their relationship, though he wonders about it constantly. Kel can look after herself, and her lover would never hurt her physically. But it’s another kind of hurt that Faleron finds himself worrying about.
It’s difficult to watch her suffering, and even more difficult because it’s for someone she loves. Faleron tries not to think about that too much.
Faleron tries not to think about a lot of things. But when he sees her, the way she loves him and continues to return to him, he can’t help but wonder...one day, if he had the chance, would he even be able to mend the pieces of her broken heart?
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Post by max on Mar 4, 2010 21:22:32 GMT 10
I think this is one of my favourite fics throughout the competition.
Very very good idea to explore.
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Post by wordy on Mar 4, 2010 21:36:31 GMT 10
Thanks max
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Post by journeycat on Mar 5, 2010 1:17:06 GMT 10
Oh, poor Fal! And poor Kel, too. A lovely idea, and you wrote it so heartbreakingly!
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