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Post by wordy on Mar 4, 2010 20:54:05 GMT 10
Title: Beauty Rating: G Length: 123 Competitor: Faleron Round/Fight: 2A Summary: A stunning reminder that beauty - and love - isn't only skin deep.
"Oh, Fal," she says. She looks at the dark hair scattered on the floor, then back up at him. He runs his hands over his head, the remaining hair no longer than his fingers, before looking up at her with a hint of a smile.
It was his one vanity. She misses running her fingers through it, and the way it tickled her neck when he held her close and tight. Sometimes, now, it even takes her a moment to recognise him in a crowd.
But when he turns to her, and smiles, and her heart races at the sight of him, at the idea of him - of them - she knows that there is nothing missing that wasn't there all along.
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Post by max on Mar 4, 2010 21:10:13 GMT 10
This is very beautiful.
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Post by journeycat on Mar 5, 2010 1:14:42 GMT 10
Just stunning, and one of my favorite pieces. The last line was absolutely precious.
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