Post by fantail on Mar 5, 2010 20:54:18 GMT 10
Title: Benefits
Rating: PG
Length: 188
Competitor: Raoul
Round/Fight: 2/A
Summary: Faleron benefits from Raoul’s teachings . . . (sequal to The First)
Raoul was pissed. Not drunk, just really really angry. He had taught her what he could only for her to move onto another man. A younger man. He knew deep down that it would happen eventually, but why him? Why Faleron of King’s Reach? He wasn’t good enough for Keladry.
He had just arrived and as soon as he had he had seen it. The look they shared. It was an intimate look that no one but them could share.
He had moulded Keladry, it was true.
But he was not to be the one to enjoy the end result.
Instead she would fall into bed with Faleron. It would be Faleron who would enjoy the sweetness that was Keladry. Faleron who would enjoy the tricks that he, Raoul, had taught her. Faleron who would feel the warmth of her body, feel her quiver and see her toes curl in pleasure.
It was Faleron who would not feel guilty and stupid for loving her . . . or lose her friendship and respect . . .
For that is what Raoul had lost with Keladry . . .
(in the name of edited, because it occured to me it's more of a Raoul fic than Faleron)
Rating: PG
Length: 188
Competitor: Raoul
Round/Fight: 2/A
Summary: Faleron benefits from Raoul’s teachings . . . (sequal to The First)
Raoul was pissed. Not drunk, just really really angry. He had taught her what he could only for her to move onto another man. A younger man. He knew deep down that it would happen eventually, but why him? Why Faleron of King’s Reach? He wasn’t good enough for Keladry.
He had just arrived and as soon as he had he had seen it. The look they shared. It was an intimate look that no one but them could share.
He had moulded Keladry, it was true.
But he was not to be the one to enjoy the end result.
Instead she would fall into bed with Faleron. It would be Faleron who would enjoy the sweetness that was Keladry. Faleron who would enjoy the tricks that he, Raoul, had taught her. Faleron who would feel the warmth of her body, feel her quiver and see her toes curl in pleasure.
It was Faleron who would not feel guilty and stupid for loving her . . . or lose her friendship and respect . . .
For that is what Raoul had lost with Keladry . . .
(in the name of edited, because it occured to me it's more of a Raoul fic than Faleron)
Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!