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Post by greenie on Mar 8, 2010 20:18:14 GMT 10
Title: Comfort Rating: G Length: 141 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 2/A Summary: Raoul is surprised.
The stifled sob caught his ear as he walked past the doorway. Cautiously, he backtracked and peered through the crack in the slightly ajar door. Kel was lying on her bed, her face buried in her arm and her pillow, and her shoulders shaking with suppressed sobs. He was shocked; he hadn’t ever seen her lose her mask that badly before. Raoul felt fury building up inside him at whoever had upset his Kel this badly. Well, not his Kel…he couldn’t help wishing for it though. Still, she clearly needed comforting. He wasn’t sure that she’d like anybody seeing her like…well, this, but surely it was better for him to go in that it would be to leave and have the door open for countless others to see her? He nodded and steeled himself, and then pushed the door softly open.
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Post by darkakane on Mar 9, 2010 3:03:14 GMT 10
I really like the indecisiveness Raoul has in this piece. Good job!
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