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Post by emberrose on Mar 8, 2010 17:51:02 GMT 10
Title: Decided Rating: G Length: 172 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 2/A Summary: Raoul and Alanna talk Kel
“Can you imagine it? Me! Following little birdies into a Spidren’s nest!” Raoul lamented.
“And you let her lead?” Alanna stared at her tall friend, “Or more importantly, Wyldon let you let her lead?”
Raoul laughed, “Yes, not that he had much of a choice. Her friends were all behind her, cheering her on.”
“Good. That man—“
Raoul placed large hands on her shoulders, “He’ll let her stay. She was beautiful Alanna, I wish you could have seen her. She’s nothing like you were at that age though, much calmer. Bigger too.”
Alanna punched Raoul lightly in the gut.
“Hey! It’s an honest fact!”
She smirked up at him, then sobered.
“Raoul, can I ask you something?”
“Anything.”
“When she’s a squire, will you—“
“You don’t need to ask. I made that decision after the Spidrens. She’s born to be a leader Alanna, as much as you were born to be a prickly old hero—” he dodged another fist, “I’ll do everything I can to make her the best of them.”
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 8, 2010 18:01:20 GMT 10
Perfect <3
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Post by darkakane on Mar 8, 2010 19:05:51 GMT 10
Adorable interaction!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 9, 2010 10:34:13 GMT 10
Aw, I love this!
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aurorax
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Post by aurorax on Mar 9, 2010 14:23:02 GMT 10
Another beautiful fic about the initial connection between Raoul and Kel- I love how you've written it so it's clear that Alanna is looking out for Kel and wants to make sure she's taken care of, but still made it clear that Raoul saw something in her from the very start and isn't just doing Alanna a favor. Also, I love Raoul sticking up for Wyldon; their mutual respect for one another even when their opinions differ is a wonderful relationship to explore.
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Post by emberrose on Mar 10, 2010 5:37:38 GMT 10
Thanks all!
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