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Post by wordy on Mar 12, 2010 11:51:05 GMT 10
Title: Little Secrets Rating: G Length: 127 Competitior: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: The one where Neal is oblivious.
“Yuki, have you noticed anything odd lately?” Neal asked.
Yuki pursed her lips and tried to hold back a smile. “Are you talking about anything in particular, dear?” “Kel. She’s been acting...odd. But I can’t quite put my finger on it.”
“I see. Have you asked her about it?”
“Of course. But all she ever says is ‘don’t be silly, Neal’. I think she’s hiding something.”
“Hmm.”
Neal looked at his wife sharply. “You know something.”
“I may have a theory,” she admitted, rather reluctantly.
“Spill.”
Yuki smiled, and walked over to smooth down her husband’s tunic. “Have you spoken to your cousin lately?”
“Who, Dom?” Neal looked thoroughly confused. “What’s he got to do with – oh.”
Yuki nodded.
“But – really?” Neal asked, a little skeptically.
“Really.”
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Post by Cass on Mar 12, 2010 13:31:24 GMT 10
Awww. Sweet! I like your use of Yuki.
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Post by Sam-and-antha on Mar 12, 2010 14:50:39 GMT 10
Its excelent except Did you mean "Yuki" here :
I liked the eand..'but really. Really." made me smile
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Post by wordy on Mar 12, 2010 15:16:45 GMT 10
Whoops! Thanks guys
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 12, 2010 18:41:29 GMT 10
Neal is such a great source of comic relief And I love that Yuki, while not so involved in the knight life all the time, is still the one who picked up on it first!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 12, 2010 18:50:59 GMT 10
Hehehe I love Neal! Very funny
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Mar 13, 2010 9:26:29 GMT 10
Oblivious Neal is the best! Great funny fic
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