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Post by Cass on Mar 13, 2010 6:10:43 GMT 10
Title: Dueling Rating: G Length: 182 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Neal lets something slip. A/N: This is one of my favorites . Also the prompt was Twiggy vs. James Bond. Which is awesome and would have been a cooler title. - "Kel, no. There is no point in me dueling you, because you're going to win." "You need to practice your swordwork, Neal. You keep favoring one side." "Yes, I know. However, as a knight who heals people who is rapidly becoming a healer who has been knighted and fights sometimes, I'm not sure how much I want to spend my morning being whacked around by you." "Neal..." "Look, find Dom. He's in the King's Own barracks and he's been talking about wanting to see you. Not sure why, since all you two have done is spar and bruise each other. Is that your new way of flirting? Because it seems to be very effective. My cousin really does talk about you a lot. It's becoming tiresome- I know who you are, right? He doesn't need to describe you in flowery terms to me." "Dom talks about me?" "Yes. I just said that. Wait Kel- where are you going?" "Barracks, Neal. That's where you said he was." "Don't fall under the spell of his pretty blue eyes, Keladry!" "...I'll try to resist. Good bye."
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 13, 2010 6:15:59 GMT 10
I love their banter. Very typical Neal in this one!
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Post by Sam-and-antha on Mar 13, 2010 8:13:18 GMT 10
OH Neal, somehow I faind it hard to see Dom describing Kel in flowery languages to Neal but Neal saying it still makes in amusing
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 13, 2010 8:39:15 GMT 10
Like Neal never described Yuki in flowery language. Love this piece
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Post by Cass on Mar 13, 2010 12:08:39 GMT 10
Neal so did. He's a bit of a hypocrite, he is.
Thanks!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 13, 2010 12:38:52 GMT 10
I love this! Neal is the best! Lovely fic!
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