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Post by wordy on Mar 12, 2010 0:31:27 GMT 10
Title: A Nice Young Man Rating: R? Length: 168 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Woman talk.
“Domitan seems like a nice young man,” Ilane remarked as she poured them each a cup of tea. Kel took hers with a small smile, thinking how wrong her mother was.
A nice young man didn’t kiss you until your lips bled, or leave your neck covered in a trail of mottled bruises which you then had to somehow hide from your squad.
A nice young man didn’t pin you to the door as soon as you closed it, already fumbling at your breeches while you struggled to tug off his shirt.
A nice young man didn’t grab you roughly by the hips and half carry you to the bed, only to throw you down on your back and spread your legs with his hand.
“What?” Kel realised her mother had said something.
Ilane smiled at her daughter, eyes crinkling over the top of her teacup. “I only asked if you were happy, dear.”
“Oh, yes,” said Kel, raising her own cup to hide her growing smile. “Very.”
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Post by Sam-and-antha on Mar 12, 2010 5:21:47 GMT 10
ohh, I like this =]. I dont think I could ever write like this so my Kudo's to you (I wold start giggling and lose track of what I was doing, Im that immature)
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 12, 2010 7:45:40 GMT 10
I think I just melted. Gah, now how am I going to do my homework? This was amazing! I love the style--just a clip of a conversation, but so perfect!
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 12, 2010 19:17:27 GMT 10
If only Ilane knew
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 12, 2010 19:40:08 GMT 10
Absolutly loved it! A nice young man indeed *snickers*
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Hopeless
Standard Bearer
Faleron Fan
I used to be Kel of King’s Reach. Then I decided hopeless was more accurate.
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Gender: Female
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Post by Hopeless on Aug 4, 2020 4:34:07 GMT 10
I have fallen in love with Kel/Dom all over again
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