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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 13, 2010 17:35:02 GMT 10
Title: Triangles of Grief Rating: PG Length: 275 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Dom comfort's Kel. AN: For Cassandra, because she wanted someone to add in Jon Although I doubt you'll like what i've done with him. He wasn’t sure why she was so upset. Yes Jon was the king, so naturally everyone would be upset that when he died. But that had been weeks ago, and she was still walking around as if in a daze. It wasn’t as if it had been a surprise either, the king had been sick for on and off for years and Roald had slowly been taking over his father’s duties during that time. Dom had always thought that she rather disliked the king. He was fairly certain that’s what everyone had believed. She had good reason too since he had not been exactly fair to her when she became a page, putting her on a probationary year. Sure he knew she would always do her duty, she would die for the king if she had too. Even so, he had always sensed some resentment there. That’s what brought him here, in her rooms comforting her while she cried softly. “Kel, it’s okay. The kingdom is going to be okay, Roald has been doing a great job this past year. Everyone knew the king was dying, that’s why Roald began taking over when he did. The kingdom’s not going to fall to pieces.” Really he couldn’t think of any other reason why she might be so upset other than worrying over the welfare of the people. “That’s not why I’m upset” He was honestly puzzled by that statement, what else was there for her to be this... devastated? “It’s because I love him, we couldn’t tell anyone. I love him so much.” It was at that moment that his heart broke into a million pieces.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 13, 2010 17:50:15 GMT 10
That Jon died in this manner - slowly and conventionally, not at all extraordinarily - is sad enough, but that Dom crumbles when Kel confesses to him is even worse
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 13, 2010 18:16:02 GMT 10
I originally wanted to write a funny Kel/Dom/Jon love triangle, but this is what came out instead. Although I must admit, I wasn't too upset about killing Jon this way...I always kind of mad at him for putting Kel on probation lol.
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Rowena
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back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 14, 2010 8:45:52 GMT 10
I liked this, though I can't really see Jon and Kel together. I think you should write the funny Jon/Kel/Dom love triangle though
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Post by Cass on Mar 14, 2010 12:24:43 GMT 10
<3 yay you threw in Jon!
(And it's ok. I love him enough to let him be killed off. Also, this is really good, especially how he died slowly, not in a battle or assassination or something.)
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 14, 2010 12:31:10 GMT 10
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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