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Post by Sam-and-antha on Mar 14, 2010 15:47:10 GMT 10
Title: Manure Hits the fan Rating: PG Length: 249 Competitor: Dom Summary: Sequel to "Say Hello To Onnalee"
Dom had just spent the last five minutes, up against a wall, being threatened. He could’ve fought back against Anders saying he had misunderstood the whole thing but, he thought, that would’ve made him look guilty. Dom honestly had no idea about what the man was talking about for the first few seconds. And it still didn’t seem like he was done ranting, or threatening Dom. Anders voice began to raise and Dom was worried he would gather an audience. It all happened rather fast, Anders was saying that he ought to go get the rest of Kel’s brothers and see what they would have to say about this and that he was angry and disappointed Kel would choose someone like him. That was the first point Dom tried to speak up, resulting in a punch to the face. Staggering backwards, Dom couldn’t keep the look of shock off his face.
When Anders went to grab him again, automatically Dom hit back. They ended up on the ground, Dom; ashamed to say it was getting the worst. (But in his defense he didn’t want to hurt the man)
Out of the corner of his eye Dom made out Kel and two other people walk back into the gardens. “STOP! Anders! What do you think your doing?!” If felt like a weight had been lifted off him, and it was, someone had pulled Anders back and was holding the mans arms. Raoul, Kel and Neal were all standing around him.
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 14, 2010 16:55:49 GMT 10
Great job! Nicely done, you did Anders wondefully And I love that Neal came with Kel to rescue Dom!
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