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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 14, 2010 18:53:18 GMT 10
Title: The One Rating: G Length: 150 Cometitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Ilane worries for her daughter.
Ilane smiled as she watched her daughter get whirled around the dance floor by that handsome sergeant. She was relieved to see her youngest daughter so happy; she worried about her the most of all her children. Keladry had chosen such a hard life for herself; she was constantly working and pushing herself to be better. The path she had chosen did not leave her with much of a reputation, so Ilane feared for her daughter’s future even though she knew Kel had decided against marriage.
She had always known that one day Kel would regret the decision, when all her friends were settled and she was left alone. But looking at her now she breathed a sigh of relief, because she knew her daughter had found the one. After all she herself still looked at Piers the way her daughter was looking at the young sergeant she was with.
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Post by Sam-and-antha on Mar 14, 2010 19:36:00 GMT 10
I like how your doing it from everyone elses prespective (it would be funny if someone asked them if they were together and they wernt yet)
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Rowena
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back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 16, 2010 1:43:40 GMT 10
That's so sweet! I like the comparison of Kel and Dom to Ilane and Piers.
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