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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 13, 2010 19:03:52 GMT 10
Title: Dimples Rating: G Length: 103 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Dom does something he regrets.
“Kel wait! It’s not what you think, I can explain!”
Kel just stared; she didn’t know what to say. She didn’t know what to do. There wasn’t anything left for her here, with him. Not now, this had tainted it. She wanted to know why. Was she not enough? Was she not feminine enough? Was it because her hair was so short? Was it because she didn’t have dimples? Cleon’s wife had dimples, and she knew he was happy with her. Maybe Dom would be happy with this dimpled blonde too. He would have to be, because she certainly wasn’t going to stay.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 14, 2010 8:36:03 GMT 10
He will certainly be regretting that, especially when Neal finds out! (Oh, new fic idea...) Very nicely written, I like how it centered on the dimples thing but was also very deep.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 16, 2010 6:43:04 GMT 10
I like the reference to Cleon's wife, and how it hints at unresolved feelings between Kel and Cleon.
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