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Post by emberrose on Mar 18, 2010 9:41:24 GMT 10
Title: Comes... Rating: PG Length:150 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 3/A Summary: He is jealous and decides to join the living dead. Which by the way, is always the solution (follows This Way, Wicked, and Something) My creation comes… Raoul jumped. He’d been attempting to finish up all the reports he’d left for the last minutes until Kel had to leave—she was delivering them to Lord Wyldon and General Vanget down the line—when a voice interrupted his concentration. He was used to hearing Kel in his thoughts, most nights she would call to him, lure him from his rooms to another dark and secluded nook within Steadfast. But this voice was not Kel’s. It belonged to a man. A man he knew, and had once suspected of changing Kel. And Raoul did not like his voice in his head. Nor did he like what it implied. Kel slid into his study and he smiled. Tonight he would say yes. Tomorrow, when Kel was gone, and he was finally like them, he would take care of that arrogant Sergeant who dared to call Kel his own.
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 18, 2010 13:22:48 GMT 10
Love it! "he would take care of that arrogant Sergeant who dared to call Roger his own. " Best line ever!
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 18, 2010 17:23:47 GMT 10
So ominous!
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Post by fantail on Mar 18, 2010 18:09:31 GMT 10
*Lost*
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Post by emberrose on Mar 19, 2010 5:54:26 GMT 10
Thanks! fantail, did you read the previous ones?
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Post by fantail on Mar 19, 2010 6:11:10 GMT 10
Yeah, but I still don't get it. I'll go through them again when my 9 month old is in bed, but I probably still wont get it. He goes to sleep and my brain flatlines . . .
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