opalgirl
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Post by opalgirl on Apr 2, 2010 13:25:42 GMT 10
Title: Adventurous Children Rating: G Length: 237 words Character: Buri Summary: Buri knows more of children then one would expect. Notes: My personal fanon is that D/N's kids are hell. on. wheels. This came of it. *** Several months of palace residence had taught Kel that a shout of: "Sarralyn! Odd's bobs, get back here!" was akin to a warcry. The youngest Salmalin bolted down corridors and passageways and away from her vexed mother at least once a week, sometimes more often. She was making tea on the hearth when the cry echoed through the hall once again. Kel sat back on her heels, startled. "Twice in one day? And all the way down here, from the scholars' wing?" Buri smirked. "Three years of running a refugee camp and you don't know how fast the little ones can move? How quickly they can be out of their mothers' sight?" The older woman lounged in a chair in her stocking feet. There was a smile in her voice that made Kel look up at her curiously. "Considering all the fuss little Sarralyn's mother made from the time she landed on the Tortallan side of the Drell, it's fair," Buri added. "You were probably still with the Yamanis - it was never a quiet moment, that summer." Kel poured tea from the pot, into the cups, and set one in front of her companion, wrapping her hands around her own cup. "You seem to know a bit about the little ones, Buri." Buri rolled her eyes. "When your best friend has six appallingly adventurous royal children, you learn these things. Whether you want to or not."
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Post by journeycat on Apr 2, 2010 13:52:47 GMT 10
Oh, I love this piece - the very first line was priceless, and I like the domesticity between Buri and Kel. I think you've caught everyone's personalities very well here, even Daine's, who doesn't make a direct appearance. The idea that Sarralyn is a charming little nightmare is so cute!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Apr 2, 2010 22:08:18 GMT 10
*squishes* This is adorable!
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Post by Lisa on Apr 3, 2010 0:30:10 GMT 10
I adore this so very much... I really can't say anything more than that because I'm too busy flailing.
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